Friday, 24 November 2006

Hello I would like to write something about polish young peopele which finished good schools and they escape to other countries (often to the UK). I would like to write why they leave Poland, and why they want stay in other country and working very hard and for example they finished very difficult Universities. Lots of people for example in UK don't understand why polish people leave their country...but the reason is to find a better life. People who have never been in Poland don't understand how situation is now in our country. Everything is worse. Really.Our political situation is terrible, and everyone know so politics is important thing in every country. But in Poland politics looks like a very long comedy film. So polish people - young people come to the UK because- first reason- they want change something in our life, they come there because they want to. And they want to forget about their future.But are there young people- like me which must come to the UK (for example), because they aren't independent and they must live with parents...They haven't got a choice, which is very important...to recover everything, everything what they lost to come here.

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becksdad said...

Hi, I'm glad you finished this post - it's very interesting reading! Please think about these errors and correct them:

peopele (spelling)
they want stay (preposition?) (see also 'they want change')
and working (wrong form)
everyone know (wrong form)
so (wrong word?)
But are there (word order)

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